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if it wasn't Goku's super saiyan transformation's twin. The art and animation weren't bad, except everything from the neck muscle twitching to the eyes, hair, and eyebrows screamed Goku. Put some original content in there to support your character or you may as well just call him Goku or Goku's evil twin.
Author's Response:
well my art skills did origonate from dbz so its going to look like dbz. But i did change to nose and eyes.
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"Animation was good, but where's the creme filling?"
The movie could be vastly improved with the addition of a background. A bit smoother transition between the music tracks would help a bit more and some sound effects and impact effects would really round it out. Though definately not bad for your first submission.
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"A good song does not make a good flash movie."
Nuff said. Don't disgrace good music with half assed flash.
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Nicely done all around. Wasn't insanely hard but I still managed to kill myself a few times. There seems to be a little bit of a bug on the one part where there's a hole blocking your path. You can right click and hit the play button to get over it without figuring out the real way to do it. I also did it the real way and still died once or twice. Also right at the beginning you can pick up two of the cards, not really a big deal though. Story was pretty solid and the cut scene was very nicely done. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yeah, the idea I was going for was that you have to knock down 3 boulders in order to cross the path. I suggest waiting for the third boulder to completely fall...wait a beat then continue on. But your solution is good too. lol. And yes...sometimes you can pick up the data card twice...it's still the same card. Still scratching my head over how to fix that minor bug. Thanks for playing.
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Ok aside from the content of the flash being not so great, what the fuck is up with the file size? If you're going to have a 20 second movie it should have a 20 second file size dammit. Putting some weird big song on the end of your flash movie will not make it good. I could've forgiven you for writing a pretty crappy flash, but then making a huge file to load with that song just ticks me off.
Author's Response:
Yes, I don't know how to OPTIMIZE YET! But i'm getting there.
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"One of the better Star Wars parodies I've seen"
The only real suggestion for improvement I could make would be to try for voices since the graphics don't leave a lot of room for expression, other than that twas a good laugh and nicely put together. Keep em coming.
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There seems to be a bit of a glitch with a pair of purple shoes for Legolas though.
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I think it was pretty funny, especially if it's your first movie. Keep em coming.
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"Despite the lack of music, this came out very well"
I think adding the music in would have made a very nice addition, but the number of disticntly different animations(I've seen some where there's almost no difference) is nice when playing with combinations. Everything looks smooth. I hope one day you get around to adding color and music to it.
Author's Response:
Color probably won't happen. It's just too hard to get color going on my old laptop. As for music... refresh this in about an hour.
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I usually don't like the serious stuff to much and try to stay away from it so it doesn't get an undeserved low vote, that was easily a 5. I gotta say as much guts as it takes to post any kind of work for public review, it takes a lot more to put up something serious about yourself. Great work, I hope to see more.
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